In honor of the feast day of St. Thomas Becket, martyred in Canterbury Cathedral in 1170, I present these pages. As always, the published book handles the screenplay formatting efficiently. The blog post, not so much.
PRIORESS, an elderly nun surrounded by pampered doggies, nods at Alys. She is a Very Important Person who is always treated with deference. Feeding table scraps to her dogs is the NUN’S BOY.
ALYS
Mother Prioress, my pleasure. Another woman on the journey will be most welcome.
REVERSE as Cratchit walks away. We see a whole gaggle of Spirits looking in the window at Scrooge’s efforts. Satisfied, they disperse. PULL OUT to show a bird’s eye view of the Spirits who walk London, now leaving Scrooge’s presence and looking for new lost souls to bemoan. PULL OUT FURTHER to the Lone Spirit on the spire of St. Paul’s Cathedral. Beneath him London is coated in a hazy, coal-burning smog, yet he sits in the sunlight. Shading his eyes, he looks off. SPIRIT-POV. In the distance, leaving the city, is a train, its engine sending steam into the blue.
A period Western, Fort Defiance is a screenplay that no longer exists.
Written in the 90s, it was shopped to actors’ agents and production companies, generated interest, and then failed to move forward. Over the years I’ve tinkered with it, trying to bring new life into a project that came oh-so-close.
Here’s what I want to say about my personal white elephant: She was a good piece of work. Since creating Fort Defiance I’ve become a better writer, and I have the skills to make this a better script . . . but it’s not possible. Any project is of a time and place. Who I was, how I thought, what the world and society considered taboo, can’t be revisited. Let the project go. This is my farewell to a lifelong story.
Recording this song reiterated that lesson. On my album Heart of Iron I had an experienced instrumentalist and recording partner. All I had to do was sing. This time, although I’ve been blessed once again with an excellent sound engineer, I had to wear every musical hat and my expertise is paltry. I wish I could present a smoother version of Desert Lullaby, but the most important thing is to get it out now, while it’s of the moment. I will get better, and the pressure of publication is part of that improvement process.